When you see tents at the store, have you ever wanted to go camping? One time I saw some tents and the exact same thing happened.
My mom worked at Scholastics at the time. She worked every day from 12a.m to 4p.m. She didn’t have any days off, so I looked at her calendar to see when she had a couple of days off. She had 7 days off next week!
Next, I asked my mom if we could go camping next week. She said,“ yes as long as everyone wants to.” I asked my family and they said,” sure we’d love to!” I told my mom that and she wanted us to get ready for next week!
A week later, we were all ready to go camping. My family and I got in the car driving to our campsite. We had a great time there! We roasted marshmallows, we played camp games and more! We had fun!
In conclusion, when you see tents at the store, have you ever wanted to go camping? I hope you will have fun going camping.
I used to go camping all the time when I was younger and really enjoyed it. I'm glad that you found it so much fun and I hope you get to go again.
ReplyDeleteI liked your story a lot. Seeing tents at the store gave you a great idea and your family had a fun trip because of it.
ReplyDeleteTo answer your question, I think seeing tents at the store do make me think about going camping. But now that I'm getting older, I think I'd rather camp in a travel trailer! ^_^
Great job.
Love, Granny
I like how you ask a question at the beginning of your piece to get me thinking about your topic. It's nice also that you go back to that idea at the end to tie the piece together, kind of like the ribbon on a gift package.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could also supply more details. I'd like to hear, for instance, more about the camp games you played. that would add even more interest to this piece.