21 – Andrace World’s Best Soccer Player
Andrace was the best soccer player in the whole world. All he has to do is blink twice, and the ball goes into the goal.
One day, Edwin challenged Andrace for the golden car. Then Andrace broke his kicking leg. The he broke his arm.
Andrace was in no shape to face Edwin and Edwin could tell just by looking at him. So one ay a kid named Alex came to help Andrace. First Andrace refused but then Alex inspired him.
After a few months of coaching Alex got Andrace back into shape. Then Andrace challenged Edwin for the golden car. Andrace started first. Andrace kicked the ball right towards the goal. Then Edwin jumped and caught the ball.
It was 16 to 14. Andrace just needed one more goal. Then Andrace blinked twice and woosh. Then the referee yelled “goal!” then Andrace hopped into the golden car and drove off into the sunset.
Wow! This story is good because it shows that sometimes things happen that make us put off our goals. And that those goals can still be accomplished later on, if we stick with it. AND, that sometimes a person like Alex can come along and help you when you need it.
ReplyDeleteGreat story. ^_^
Love, Granny
Driving a golden car into the sunset must be great. What a good story.
ReplyDeleteAlso we see that even sometimes when things are tough like injuries, if you work hard you can come back.
Did you read the story after you wrote it? I noticed that you forgot to put the 'd' on the word day. If you read the story after you are done, you will be able to correct silly mistakes like that. We all make mistakes and if you check your work, you can catch most of them.
Good job.
I want a golden car. Andrace must be good to just have to blink to make a goal. Nice story!
ReplyDeleteI like your stsory about Andrace being the world's best soccer player!!!
ReplyDeletesincerely,
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Cool soccer game you had.Did you have fun.
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