3 – David Backam
David Backam is the best soccer player in the world. Then there was a contest. A man made the contents because he needed players for his team. Because David Backam is really good at soccer. He was really good at kicking the ball really hard and making goals. So he enjoyed the mans team and David was the best one in is team. The Backam won a trophy. He enjoyed the mans team called the Glaxy team. Now Backam is the captain for his team. David Backam is my favorite soccer player in the world.
Seems like you follow soccer because you know about the players and teams. That's great.
ReplyDeleteDid you check how David Beckham spells his name. And isn't the team Galaxy. These mistakes you might catch if you read the story after you write it.
David Beckham is one of the best, that's for sure.
I'm glad that you enjoy watching soccer. My son used to play soccer when he was growing up and it took us a long time to figure out the rules. Once we knew the rules, it was a lot better to watch. ^_^
ReplyDeleteIt's nice when people have contests because it gives other people an opportunity that they might not have otherwise. I'm glad that David won the trophy and enjoyed playing on the team.
Great story!
Love, Granny