How does it feel if someone goes up to your face and says, “ha-ha I have this and you have that,” How does it feel when your ashamed of that you don’t have any power? Well I have a dream to get rid of all the money because people have too much power over money. If people have too much power, than that’s a hug rub it in your face.
We could burn all the money, and we could make everything free. When all that is done, then no more problems, but there might be one more problem. Then everyone who insulted you would feel because they do have something that you do. Courage.
I think the world would be better because everything would be free.
This is a great piece. I think you should continue to think about this idea. How would humans exchange goods without money? How can we create cooperative communities where all individuals work together for the good of the whole group? How would a community like this look in our modern world? Keep up the great work and critical thinking!
ReplyDeleteI love the idea! Sadly, people have tried things like that and it didn't work out very well. My only critique would be that I felt a few of the sentences were broken or placed as a fragment of another. Don't worry, though, it will come with time! Writing can be very difficult but with practice and a passion for it, it becomes easy and fun!
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It doesn't matter what people HAVE, it matters who they ARE. You have a good heart, I can see that in your writing. And you can't buy a good heart, no matter how much money you have.
ReplyDeleteYou keep thinking about things. The world needs thinkers. And when you write about those things, that will make us think, too.
Thank you for sharing your story with me. ^_^
Love, Granny